The horses have not been described either.
Tinne is a young sorcerer and Ren is a young swordsman with a habit of thievery.
I will greatly appreciate any input. Thanks,
D.E.
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Last Saturday I had a great, private tutorial with a writing coach. She brought to my attention the fact all horse owners have names for their horses. Ren and Tinne do not have names for theirs. I am looking for suggestions.
The horses have not been described either. Tinne is a young sorcerer and Ren is a young swordsman with a habit of thievery. I will greatly appreciate any input. Thanks, D.E.
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